I would like to thank Adam Fenner for choosing my poem Silhouette to review. Thank you đ
And thank you to Living Poetry, Bartholomew Barker for the prompt.
Poetry, writing, drawing, painting and more.
I would like to thank Adam Fenner for choosing my poem Silhouette to review. Thank you đ
And thank you to Living Poetry, Bartholomew Barker for the prompt.
Smith
âHi Smith.â Dillon smiled at Evie.
Evie heard the sound of spitting. âI guess that be y we just keep lectinâ you?â
âWhat did you think of the show?â Dillon asked.
âWaitinâ on ânother show.â She spat.
Evie leaned up, âwhat other show?â
âSpect heâd ask fur your hand.â She spat. âWeddinâs make me cry.â
âDone did.â Evie held up her hand, the ring sparkled in the moon light.
She spat, âwhen u tieinâ the knot?â
âNow, if sheâd let me.â Dillon teased.
âU not gittenâ yunger. What âbout babies?â
Evie blushed, âIâm a little long in the tooth to be poppinâ out babies.â
Smith spat, âmaw was 55 when she had me. Thought she was done with the change n all.â She spat, laughing, âone more bun in the oven.â
âShe was a better woman than me.â
âEvie brought some snacks. Wanna join us?â
She spat, âsnacks?â
Dillon helped Evie out of the back of the truck. It was then she noticed the shotgun draped over Smithâs arm. They spread out the blanket to sit on. Makinâ sure not to put it in Smithâs chaw juice. Remarkably they didnât see any. Dillon handed her the basket and she sat with her back against a tire. Dillon sat beside her. Smith spat before she sat across from them.
Evie spoke as she emptied the basket, âI tried to cut out a shooting star but the tail fell off.â The sandwich she handed to Smith was in the shape of a star. She pulled out a full moon and a crescent moon. âI tried to make them festive. We have some nabs, some chocolate, nuts and hot chocolate.â Dillon held a cup while Evie poured, passinâ it over to Smith.
âMilk or water,â Smith asked?
âMilk?â Evie answered.
Smith nodded at Dillon, âa keeper this one.â
Dillon kissed the top of her hand, âI know.â
Funny story.
The first time I got covid, it messed with my sense of taste. Coffee was beyond nasty. My beloved Diet Mt. Dew was gross. Coke products were okay but Pepsi products were undrinkable. Just random foods that shouldnât be salty tasted like I was licking a salt shaker.
Iâve started drinking matcha tea. The 3 big ingredients in matcha tea are turmeric, black pepper and green tea. A box (with tax) is about $4.00 at Kroger. After reading the ingredients, I thought, I can buy a box of turmeric and make this way cheaper. So thatâs what Iâve been doing.
The other day, I make a cup and as Iâm drinking, it just keeps getting saltier. I know I put pepper in my tea because some of the pepper flakes float to the top. Heck no! Iâve got covid for the 3rd time this year?
Convinced I have covid – AGAIN! Take a covid test is the first thing I do when I get home. I know Chico is about to bust. But must! – take! – covid test! Praise God itâs not Covid. What then!?
I wash my cup. Make another. Perfect.
????? What the?
This time, when I make my cup of tea, Iâm making dang sure I get pepper. As I search the packet bag for pepper, I discover pepper packets are black. Salt packets are red. EXCEPT for Burger King. Their salt packets are blue. The only thing that makes sense is that a salt and pepper packet were stuck together and I put both in my tea.
In this case, salt was nasty. đ§Not the flavor I was going for.

Youâve got to be kiddinâ me
Dillon took the basket from Evie puttinâ it in the backseat of his truck as she hopped in the passengers seat. He turned her around so that her knees were at his waist, âmadam,â he grinned. âDo not deny me the pleasure of helping you in my truck.â He kissed her.
âSir, if it is pleasure you seek, I will not deny thee.â
He trailed his thumb across her cheek, âIâve missed you.â
As he walked around the truck, she saw him. Really saw him in the pole light. She didnât say anything for a while. When she looked at him he was grinninâ from ear to ear. She gushed, âyou had your tint taken off the front.â
âLowered,â he never stopped smiling. âI scared you. Even though you know itâs my truck, with my windows that dark, you canât see whoâs driving.â
She kissed him, then caressed his cheek, âthat was very sweet.â He took her hand in his and kissed it. âHow was tint that dark legal?â
He winked, âwhoâs gonna pull the sheriff over?â
âYou booger.â She teased. âSmith isnât gonna shoot at us is she?â
âWeâre gonna go around and above her house. But I did call her to tell her we would be in the area. More for our safety than hers.â
Evie loved the drive up the mountain. As they drove, she searched her memory, âdonât think Iâve ever been up the mountain in the dark.â
âItâs truly a different experience. Whatâs in the basket?â
âNothing heavy. Some crackers. Thermos of hot chocolate. Couple peanut butter sandwiches. Snacky type stuff. Do you think we will really get to see the aurora borealis tonight?â
âThey are sayinâ tonight is our best chance.â
âI guess weâll find out together.â
Once they past Smithâs house, the road turned into an old logging road. Dillon got out, walked around the front of the truck, came back and put the truck in the lowest gear it had. Evie laughed, âthat is what dad called âbulldogâ.â
âYour dad was always cominâ up with colorful turn-ah-phrases.â
The truck whined with each roll of the wheels. Shaking and bouncing its passengers as they inched toward the top of the mountain. Evie couldnât stop laughing. âWhatâs so funny?â Dillon asked.
Between giggles she spewed, âthis.â With each bounce, she just laughed that much harder. By the time they reached the top, she was in tears.
He back the truck up so that they had the best few of the night sky from the bed of the truck. They worked together to spread out the sleeping bags so they had something more comfortable than metal to sit on. Dillon threw a blanket in the back as she retrieved the basket.
About 11:30 pm, the sky started its show. Evie stood up watching the colors fight for supremacy as they danced across the horizon. Like waves washing on shore they flowed back and forth. âBeautiful,â Evie sighed. Rejoining Dillon.

The Beast is the name for a printer bigger than a truck. My work crew really likes creamer in their coffee. đ
Your day
Rebecca walked through the door to the amazing smell of food. âHey baby.â
âHi, sweetheart.â
âWhatâs cookinâ?â She asked playfully.
âSpaghetti. How was your day?â
âWild. You?
âI bumped into Evelyn at the grocery. Not literally of course.â
âI thought she had all her food delivered. There is always someone over there.â
He shrugged, âdonât know. Something isnât right somehow. She broke down in the middle of the produce sobbing. I just sat in the floor with her. Felt like she needed a hug.â
Rebecca froze in place. A fork in one hand and a plate in the other. â You didnât.â She hissed.
âNo. It wasnât my place.â
She continued setting the table, âdamn straight it ainât.â
âWidow Blake showed up.â
âAttention seeking. Thatâs all that is.â
Simon had so much he wanted to say but he let it go.
When someone comments on a post, Iâve been doing the đ emoji. For whatever reason, Jetpack isnât allowing me to add emojis in the comment section. Sadness.
This sadness started yesterday.

Peel, back each layer.
Last – prettier than the first.
Beauty redefined.
Featherless biped
Dillon found Evie sitting on their soon to be back porch wrapped in a blanket watching the sun set. As he set down, he picked her up putting her on his lap. As she snuggled in he asked, âfeel better?â
âI guess Iâm the talk of the town?â
âWidow Blake called me.â
âDillon, are you sure about me? As a featherless biped, most days, Iâm okay. But it doesnât seem to take anything for me to fall apart. Are you honestly sure you want to deal with this kind of stress?â
He had to take that question apart with questions of his own. âFeatherless biped?â
âPlato defined a âhuman beingâ as a âfeatherless bipedâ.â
âIâm no walk in the park.â
âYouâre the most laid back featherless biped I know.â
âBe that as it may.â She could feel him shrug. âWhy didnât you call or text me?â
âI never know what youâre doing. It would kill me if I sent you a text and distracted you causinâ something bad to happen. To you or someone else.â
âI understand that. You are my top priority.â
âYouâre mine. So we will need to work something out.â
âAgreed.â He paused for a moment, â1 Corinthians 13:4-7.â Tree of Life Version ââLove is patient, love is kind, it does not envy, it does not brag, it is not puffed up, it does not behave inappropriately, it does not seek its own way, it is not provoked,
it keeps no account of wrong, it does not rejoice over injustice but rejoices in the truth; it bears all things, it believes all things,
it hopes all things, it endures all things.â
As Christians, we seek a love like this. How many of us can say, we love like this? Not only a romantic partner but ourselves.â
Evie rose up in his lap. âAre you saying to me that you are going to love me like that passage?â
âIt is my goal to try.â
âI need to love myself like that?â
âI canât tell you how to feel. The best I can do is tell you how I feel and try my best to show you. Though at times, Iâm sure the words get lost.â
She blushed, âI get that. It is much easier for me to love you like that than it is for me to love myself.â
Iâll take phone a friend for $100 Alex,
before this wind blows me to Smilax
hope this storm doesnât get too bad, or Cheekie will never relax.
The proper number of hours of sleep I wish to max.
Beter find a way to get my bike off the basement floor.
Mud in the gears from a flooded basement would be a bore.
Stay safe and dry my friend, a hole in your life we will pray the wind not create a chore
No down trees or clean up to make your back sore